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In writing week we were writing horror stories. We went to the forest and jasmine did a told a horror story whilst we sat round the fire.

                                                                    LOST CONTROL

  ne dark and gloomy night a group of friends decidde ,as it was halloween, to go on a horror train . they got into the cart go go go go , of they went!!!!!

Vampire cut outs were on the walls. zombie heads dangled down from the ceiling, doors opening and closeing pretnding to lock them in.

Suddenly they stopped, the door to get out was closed, the way they got in was closed.All of them thought they were 'locked in'. Little did they know the ride operator had lost controll of the ride.It wasnt letting him do anything to get them out.

Suddenly somthing started dripping on them. The coffin opened. SIloets on the wall.A hand came out of the coffin. things started to walk towards them.AAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The ride operator called the fire patrol, they finally managed to get there and open the doors. They were too late.

AAAAAAAAAARGH!

I bet they wish the didn't go on that mission.

Jimmys amazing story. read on...

At life shils we learnt ho to get out of the house when thir is a fire also yoyu need id to get in someone house to show you aclly  someone who they invited or get prodects over age also they told us abot how fast cars go and save pepole who have got6 hurt pr it looks like they bare dead so you give them a c.p.r.

STOP DEFORESTATION MAN! read on

As we are beginning to think about secondary schools, we are also wondering about careers.

Adults: What do you do? How did you get there?

Children? What would you like to be when you are older? Why? What will you need to do to get you there?

In my garden,late in the night,i heard a grawl like thunder.[The rough dog coverd in blood appeard in front of of me, i was frightened.]The dog was stareing at me,so i ran away from the dog but the dog was too fast and caught me up.The dog sharp teeth bite my arm, my arm was in pain but then there were more then one dog there were 10 ten dogs so i ran away as fast i could but the dogs were to fast, so u hid in a safe place

I was at home on my own late at night .i stepped into the living room and started watching tv .on the to I saw freaky and creepy clowns ! I turned it on the next channel and I pressed select and it said clowns channel.i flicked the button a few times more times and all the pictures on different channels were all of scary red clowns Staring at ME!as I went up the stairs I heard a long creak from the door .i replied to my self who is that .I went down the stairs , opened my curtains and there I saw a clown knocking on my window with a pie ? I opened my curtain again and the creepy red painted clown was gone ! all I could see was the glimpse of the moon silhouetting on our house.                      

 I went into the kitchen whilst I knew something or someone was following me .i suggested to myself I should go on a walk .As I walked I heard a litttle Brussels in the trees . scared, I stood still.suddenly, i remembered I was alone .  .  .

I was playing with my friend on Halloween at Avon valley. Me and my friend were going into this creepy circus. Every corner we turned there was a clown,looked like the mcdonalds clown. I was so scared. The clowns We're vicious.There was this bit where u were squished I didn't like it because I'm costar phobic. When we were in the circus my heart was in my mouth and and like bats in my belly. When we got my heart was racing.The night wasn't over just yet. when I was walking around the circus there were clowns on pogo sticks. My phone rang and I answred it and there was a dog barking so I hanged up. The unknown number rang again so I shouted at the person,turns out it was the McDonalds clown it scared me.

As the police grabbed my hands,I felt so angry with mysled because I shouldn't have robbed anything in the bears house. My heart was beating so fast  that I couldn't stop it myslef when I was going to the blue, old,stinky formula car. Who cares if I go to prison? My family just left me when I was a little girl. My caretakeris very rude and she wants me to go prison too.Frightened,scared and anxious, I don't know what they're going to do to me.The police gave me yucky,disgusting food. They treat me like a dog in a street. I feel like having yummy, devious,good food but the police are so strick and scary.After that when it was midnight they gave me a blanket and a pillow even they doesn't give some food,same as the caretaker doesn't give it too. I felt so exhausted, tired,stressed Because the others jailer were like snoring loudly. I was so worried, spending All my life on the prison.I didn't feel that much sleepy. I think I've learned my lesson now!

Dear Diary ,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Anxiously , I bit my nails .I was so fed up. i felt this way because I was chained up like a prisoner . Why was I born this way? I wish I was beautiful . When I go outside people laugh so I bawled my fat eyes out .I am so ugly .i want to be popular . My life is almost dull , it needs to get better . While my dad lit up the candle my heart skipped a beat . he put a big fat rat and a candle for my birthday cake.

In year six, we have reinvented story tales in a new light.